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I’m a marionette on a string,
Dancing to your words,
Watch my jerking movements as I attempt to walk towards you,
Always drooping downwards,
Let me crumple to the floor when you’re tired of watching me dance,
Walk away and don’t look back,
I can only live under your hand.

I can dream of becoming a “real” girl,
But there is no fairy to grant my wish.
You turn… and stare… I wish I could speak,
Tell you I love you, tell you I need you!
With your backward glance you take another piece of my heart,
Never to return it,
But I don’t want it back.

Pick me up and make me dance and sway,
Once again I’m a puppet on your string,
You promise you love me and say you’ll never to break my heart,
But then you place me down again,
And thus I am forgotten,
Feeling my heart dieing,
You said you wouldn’t break it,
You never lied,
You killed it.

Years go bye you don’t have the time to take a second glance,
And never remember my existence,
But I still hope,
One day you will find me,
One day you will save me,
One day you will resurrect my dead heart.


Hark what is this?
You’ve stopped,
Your turning,
Have I been remembered?
You see me,
Your eyes light up with forgotten memories,
And with that sweet, sweet smile,
You pick me up and I begin to dance.

You are my fairy
And you have granted my wish,
For in your eyes I am the real girl I dreamt to be,
And with your magic,
My old wooden dust covered body has come to life,
Discarding its hard shell as soft skin replaces old wood,
I am reborn,
Never to be forgotten,
My heart is alive freshly revived.

Your face is so shocked,
Yet I am here,
I can no longer dance on strings to your words,
But I can ask you to dance with me,
Will you?
Holding out my empty hand,
Waiting for you to fill it with yours.

You smile,
And take my hand,
To dance from the heart,
And not on command,
Is how we live for forever onwards.

Never forget me,
For now I am real,
And will be forever,
As I will be forever living by your magic,
And if you forget me it will be undone,
And I will return,
Return to being a piteous marionette,
Dancing to your words,
Controlled your stings.
©2009-2010 ~Saskia-Mu
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Author's Comments

A marionette dreaming to be human so she can be with the one she loves, but over the years she goes from being the favorite toy deemed to be the favorite of the one she loves to being forgotten by him, although one day a passing glance reminds him of the things said he would never do and realised he did them, and so when he begins to make her dance her dream and wish becomes his and so she becomes real, never to be forgotten again.

thats the story of it anyway, but if you think a different story fits it better feel free to think of one your self, there are many versions of the truth!

hope you like it, it will become the #2 of the 100 thingyo in my journal; love ^-^

and yes it does occasionally have referance to Pinocchio :)

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:iconrha6a:
This is so incredible, i absolutely love it (and would even attach the Love & Wow! emicon to this comment but don't know how) LOL!
:iconsaskia-mu:
haha neither!! i looked for a million years!! (not really id be super old if i had) but i still cant find the cute little thing with the love heart ballon!! :| so sad :(
sooo thank you ^_^
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:iconmysteryfang:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! saskia! THATS BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE IT!!!
AmAAAAAAAAZING!
:iconsaskia-mu:
thankies yasmine :) ^-^
x0x0
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